|
Post by herm-own-ninny on Mar 22, 2007 18:16:05 GMT -5
... hmmmm... spell check should become a better friend, huh.
I will go over that section. I honestly didn't catch any dialogue things, but that might be because the last time I read over this was when I was writing it.
thanks for the tip.
|
|
|
Post by herm-own-ninny on Mar 20, 2008 21:26:11 GMT -5
alright. Since no one (except bri) seems to understand the concept of critisism, I will no longer post 'iris' here. If you really will critisize my work, then I will PM it to you upon request. I do appreciate that you all seem to like my work, but I want to know what I can imporove on (because writing is a constant evolution of the writer).
Please PM me if you want to critique my work.
Thank you
*note, this thread will be locked shortly after my post.
|
|
|
Post by twilight_angel on Mar 22, 2008 11:51:54 GMT -5
liar it's no tlocked yet
|
|
|
Post by musicfreak15 on Mar 22, 2008 12:57:29 GMT -5
don't encourage her, I wanna finish reading it first
|
|
|
Post by herm-own-ninny on Mar 22, 2008 17:09:04 GMT -5
what are you talking about? I just locked it....
Alright. If you didn't get it the first time. If you are willing to give constructive critisizm I will send it to you. Hear that Christina! I will send it if you help me improve. (I don't care if it's the occasional spelling mistake or you don't like one of the characters. Tell me if you get lost in a section or something like that. I'm only looking for one thing. )
I wuv you all. PM me with requests (but first promise to help me!)
|
|
|
Post by songbreese on Mar 24, 2008 16:03:30 GMT -5
ooo! me! pick me!
|
|
|
Post by herm-own-ninny on Apr 19, 2008 12:14:17 GMT -5
YAY! some one to tell me to work on stuff.
*Points to brinae* How bout the brunette in the black?
Anyone else?
|
|