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Post by twilight_angel on Feb 5, 2007 17:17:20 GMT -5
if you're like me... and Loopy over there you have about fifty stories at once in you're head. Go ahead tell us all about them, will tell you what we think and give some......uh.....advice.
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Post by songbreese on Feb 5, 2007 19:51:22 GMT -5
Erm, I've got one idea(among many):
Alien girl main character. Kind of a cat-like species. And she's kinda lost and alone in the galaxy. When we first see her she's on a broken down space station. And that's where my plot line dies. I've had several ideas about her goal throughout the story-get back to her home planet, find some kind of treasure or jewel, finds out about a prophecy to save a race of aliens-but it all sounds cliche.
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Post by Hombre Palido on Feb 10, 2007 19:26:20 GMT -5
Die and SHinya based story...but I'm putting that off and writing and drawing a comic..has no title...as of yet...doesn't even have a cover page...THE HECK MAN?!
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Post by twilight_angel on Feb 16, 2007 16:12:38 GMT -5
i got a new one but it's rather creepy.
it's about a girl whose friend is madly in love with herand WON'T leave her alone.
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Post by songbreese on Feb 16, 2007 20:18:12 GMT -5
cool, sounds good. Wait, male or female friend?
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Post by Hombre Palido on Feb 16, 2007 21:08:23 GMT -5
Hehehe.....sounds like my story...just..a little less obsession..after all..Kyo cares about Shin-chan so much that he will protect him at all costs! :3
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Post by pythonheart on Feb 16, 2007 21:31:11 GMT -5
the closest thing i got is the story of Faaj(or Fajj?) Esel, the character im using for the blog im creating. alls i got is: name; fajj esel -but im not sure if it should be spelled fajj or faaj age; 37-40 born in america, parents immigrants from romania (or another country in that vicinity?) he lives in his parent's basement a depressed middle-aged teacher in an ordinary high school, bent on taking over ____(something....? the world? the school? the country?). but whatever he takes over, hes starting with the school. eventually finds a love interest in a younger (female) teacher. but what school? around where- a city, suburb? and what other details should i include? oh, and what should his username be? i was thinking "master" i love this song  |
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Post by songbreese on Feb 16, 2007 22:15:46 GMT -5
"master" is definatly gonna be taken, I'd come up with some back ups
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Post by pythonheart on Feb 16, 2007 22:19:39 GMT -5
ah, true.
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Post by songbreese on Feb 17, 2007 17:28:18 GMT -5
If you like "master" i'd add some numbers to the end, like "master61425". Then it'd show how lame he is that he can't come up with an original username. ;D
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Post by twilight_angel on Mar 5, 2007 20:16:55 GMT -5
kay i got another one....hold on how to write this......
so okay it's about this person (haven't decided boy or girl) who has been knowing all their life that they don't belong..... so eventually their wish comes true and she/he get's to go to this other world. She/he tells all of her/his friends secretly about this, then writes a note to her/his oldest friend and tells her that she/he is leaving and he, (Okay i decided main charecter is a girl)is their. ( he is someone fom a dream that they both shared long,long ago.) Just when she is about to leave her old friend shows up and tells her, "i have missed you, and it seems that you have always been right,. Even though it seems untrue, i have never stopped believing." then the main charecter answers, "someday i'll find a way to bring you there." and wioth that she leaves, vanishing into the darkness( haven't figured out how.)
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Post by songbreese on Mar 6, 2007 20:29:51 GMT -5
oooo
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Post by twilight_angel on Mar 7, 2007 16:10:05 GMT -5
This ones about... it's a sercet hmmm....should i tell?
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Post by twilight_angel on Mar 7, 2007 16:38:45 GMT -5
never mind anyway.....
it's about this person, and they are reallly sad. they can't stand to be around... it's now part of the story above. Their life has been filled with betrail by her closest friends. Her life has been going around like this until about 7th grade then she finally meets a group of friends that understand her.....soft of..... In 5th grade alot of her friends from kindergarden seem to drift away and she is left alone. all she wants to do is get out of here. this is why everynight when the stars are out she wishes to go to her story worlds wee she is loved and accepted. one night she goes out but a sudden thunderstorm appears after she makes her wish. A bolt of lightning hits the ground just in front of her. The bolt of lightning sends her back about 20 feet, mind you she's standing in a field, and knocks her out for a few short minutes. She can hear voices though, not from around her but in her head. they tell her of where who she was and when she'll return there. When she gets up again she finds a book, sitting in the spot where the lightning hit. This book is filled with an ancient style of writing. at first she ccan't read it but slowly it becomes clearer and clearer until she is able to read and write in it. Eventually she stops writing in english and starts writing in the ancient language. Her friends notice this and become worried. They keep bothering her about it but she won't say where it came from or what it means.
lt it hooks on to the story up above, 3 posts?
After she leaves another thing, is there it asks her friends if she left. The thing asks them to desscribe the other person. They do and it shakes it's head. The friends are all like what's wrong.
the thing is like this is bad the person she left with is evil and a murderer. The thing asks the friends if they want to help her and they say yes so they go where thier friend went.
.....zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....What? oh! Right the story!
Anyway they keep going on getting stronger until they have gotten to where thier friend is and they call for a battle royal with the person who took their friend away in the first place and anyway they keep trying and fighting till eventually Their friend walks in and sees them fighting . She tells them to stop, but before they can reply the person who had taken her here grabs her and tell her friends to stop or she dies.
They stop and they are taken away to the dungeons of the place...(They are to be put back on earth *cough* killed*Cough, cough*) so eventually this all turns out somehowthat their friend has a choice of going home or staying here.
and that's where i stop writing.
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Post by twilight_angel on Mar 7, 2007 17:05:13 GMT -5
haha.... look at this  |
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Post by herm-own-ninny on Mar 22, 2007 18:49:22 GMT -5
haha.... look at this lol That is amazing! |
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Post by twilight_angel on Mar 25, 2007 18:14:42 GMT -5
Told you!
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Post by twilight_angel on Mar 25, 2007 18:34:55 GMT -5
Okay this is a new one...
it begins (by the way I"m planning on writting this down and have already started) with this girl she's about 18...ish. and she's on her way home from collage. Two years prior her parents were killed, she was an only child...I think. So when she gets to her house she finds that soome one is there. Before she can do anything something comes flying out at her and she's knocked to the ground...unconsious. When she wakes up she finds that she is outside and there is someone there. Another person appears with some evil looking shot type thing. She hears them talking and they said something along the lines of she's bitten. After they agrue about whether or not she's really bitten, the second person gives her a shot to the neck. SHe passes out agian and wakes up not knowing who or where she is. Anyway it turns out that she has been taken into the underground world of gene splicing. Later we find out that what they gave her was supposed to be a female version of the gene splicing potion (for lack of a better word.) The potion will awaken the dorment genes of people it could be anything. we find out that she has the dorment genes of a werewolf except that she stays that way forever.
....if you want to find out more itterogate me at school...I'll be brnging the notebook that I'm writting it down in to school.
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Post by songbreese on Mar 27, 2007 19:46:43 GMT -5
I like both your story ideas.
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Post by herm-own-ninny on Mar 28, 2007 19:31:30 GMT -5
Which one shall I tell you about.... hmmmmmm....
O how bout the reincarnation one. That one'll be fun.
okay, it's set in a middle ages/renasance setting kings and queens and such, the only differance being that in this perticular country, for lack of a better term, has something like a god king (well, queen to be more specific, but whatever) the thing is, unknown to most of the people, the queen isn't exactly a god or reincarnation of a god, they acctually have the god(ess) inside their head (think DNAngel type thing)
Well, there was a massive take over by some old guy who wasn't even from the country. He thinks he is improving on the country, since he is making it in his old contry's image. There is unrest in the country, most the people unhappy with their new king and a few in support of him. When he took over the goddess/queen vanished and was later declared dead.
However, unknown to most of the people (except the new ruler, he knew something about her existance. He also has no idea that the goddess is real since he has a very scientific outlook on everything), her daughter (she was about 2 at the time) lived and was smuggled to live with an old scholar and his daughter, husband, and their daughter.
She never knew she was royal blood and that the voice in her head (the goddess) was just a figment of her imagination. Now, at age ____(I haven't decided yet) she has to reclaim the thrown, figure out how to live in harmony with the goddess in her head, and do all that without getting killed.
There are some loose ends here and their (like names for instance) but that's the basic idea.
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Post by songbreese on Mar 30, 2007 20:36:26 GMT -5
dude. *stares in awe at Tonk's story idea*
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Post by Circe on Mar 31, 2007 22:22:15 GMT -5
that story really is awesome...wow
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Post by pythonheart on Apr 1, 2007 19:48:19 GMT -5
ooh..
well, ive come up with this horribly chick-flickish story. GUYS BEWARE.
the basic idea is that this boy lives in this old (two story) house, and a girl moves in next door(also old twostory house) they become friends, best friends really, and the girl's bedroom window is straight across from the guys', so they always talk and write signs to each other since the windows are about 7 feet from each other (AND DONT GET ANY IDEAS INCLUDING BEDROOM WINDOWS, LACK OF CLOTHES, AND HORMONES. THAT IS NOT IN THE STORY.). gradually they guy starts to like the girl, and the girl notices and starts to like him too ("accidentally in love", if you will.) but the cool thing is theyre best friends still, so they're not the kind of teenage romance that consists of only making out. they still just hang out in a non-hormonal (also for lack of a better term)way.
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Post by Display name on Apr 1, 2007 20:43:17 GMT -5
HE he thats true....teenage romance consisting of only making out.....
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Post by twilight_angel on Apr 2, 2007 15:39:16 GMT -5
sounds good.
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Post by herm-own-ninny on Apr 4, 2007 16:03:06 GMT -5
dude. *stares in awe at Tonk's story idea* *laughs* |
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Post by twilight_angel on Apr 4, 2007 18:20:38 GMT -5
I have to get this onoe down soon, but I don't think you guys know but over half of my stories are dreams that I've had.
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Post by pythonheart on Apr 4, 2007 19:47:10 GMT -5
HE he thats true....teenage romance consisting of only making out..... but this story thing doesnt. |
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Post by twilight_angel on Apr 29, 2007 10:10:02 GMT -5
I think everyone should get over it. We are in high school...right?
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Post by herm-own-ninny on Apr 29, 2007 16:17:17 GMT -5
I think everyone should get over it. We are in high school...right? ...... I guess. Wait, get over what. *stares off into space* I think I get where your comming from. I don't perticularly like romance novels, or stories, unless they have something more interesting that trying to get a guy/ or girl to like the main char. Like the romance is part of a sub plot, or if it's still the main thing but there are other things happening. The later, is still kinda iffy. That, and it depends on how interestingly it's written. |
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